Comments on: Writing’s Vagaries

By: Jennifer

Jennifer — Fri, 18 May 2007 15:55:19 +0000

Okay, Kira and Barbara, I’ve got an explanation written in further along, next chapter. We’ll see if she goes for it. :thumbsup:

By: barbara

barbara — Fri, 18 May 2007 15:15:40 +0000

I like the cream. I thought it was very funny. :cooldance:

By: Kira

Kira — Fri, 18 May 2007 15:14:31 +0000

:happy2: :happy2: :happy2:
OMG! Leave it in for sure. I really want to know what Precious says

Kira

By: Ginger

Ginger — Fri, 18 May 2007 15:10:09 +0000

:happy2: You folks sure are happy this Friday. What have you been drinking this morning? Too, too funny about the cream.

By: Jennifer

Jennifer — Fri, 18 May 2007 14:49:02 +0000

Marilyn, people the world over are grateful he made it to H. :bowdown: :happy2:

:happy2: :happy2: Rhonda. That was hysterical. Hey, we’ve got to make sure to give her a jolt now and then. It’s our job to keep her on her editorial toes. (I am so screwing myself here– now she’ll send me some 8 page revision letter, single-spaced just to prove how much she’s on those editorial toes. :doh:)

By: Rhonda

Rhonda — Fri, 18 May 2007 14:34:25 +0000

Jen, I can see Precious rolling over this. :mrgreen: Nothing like putting a little something in there to keep her on her toes. Remember this?

**That part of him she’d been fantasizing about sprang free, unbelievably small–disproportionate to the rest of him, she thought sadly–but erect and ready for her touch. A steady throb built between her legs, her nipples tingled, and her mouth watered just looking at him. She’d always liked Vienna sausages.**

Note from Precious was short and to the point–no Vienna sausages in Blaze. :happy2:

By: Marilyn

Marilyn — Fri, 18 May 2007 14:12:26 +0000

Just imagine what life would be like if the man who invented Preparation H had stopped with the letter G. :mrgreen:

By: Jennifer

Jennifer — Fri, 18 May 2007 14:11:22 +0000

Marilyn, funny you should mention this. I’ve been trying to figure out a way to keep it, too. It started out as a joke but I rather like it. Precious, however, may ixnay it from all angles. 8O

By: Jennifer

Jennifer — Fri, 18 May 2007 14:06:33 +0000

Andrea, I probably need to get a life or just get out more so I’m not so amused by the cream. I guess I just have to get my laughs where I can. :mrgreen:

:happy2: Kimberly. I’d go with the Prep H, probably.

As it stands now, I’ve got it written with the “to”.

By: Marilyn

Marilyn — Fri, 18 May 2007 13:49:52 +0000

:happy2:

I’ll let the experts decide on the preposition.

Love the hemorrhoid cream. Maybe it belongs to his grandma who visited last month and he has just been too lazy to do something with it.

Let us know if you DO leave it in and what your editor’s response is.