May 18, 2007

Writing’s Vagaries

Sunny stepped out of her panties and dropped them to the floor.

Sunny stepped out of her panties and dropped them on the floor.

On or to? To or on?

Fifteen minutes of dithering over which preposition. There is a subtle difference. :wallbash:

This however flowed easily:

Standing naked in Cade’s bathroom felt decidedly intimate. His toothbrush and a razor sat on the edge of the sink. A black and burgundy velour robe hung from a hook on the back of the door. A tube of hemorrhoid cream lay on the back of the toilet. Apparently she wasn’t the only pain in his ass.

The last two lines were written for my own amusement. My amusement stemming from the thought of leaving them in the manuscript for my editor to find. :happy2::devil::happy2:

Of course we all know a Blaze hero can’t have hemorrhoid cream left on the back of his toilet. He has to keep that hidden in the under-sink cabinet… :happy2::doh:

Have a nice weekend!! :cooldance:

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