September 14, 2007

Editorial License

Part of Girl’s weekly assignment in language arts is to write a story incorporating 20 of her 30 vocab words. Not as easy as it sounds. Lycanthrope, transmogrify, sui geris, soporific, autodidact, in medias res, circumambient, to name a few.

Anyway, I’m proofreading and doing a little editing for her (this weekend we will have a mini-lesson on formatting and punctuation) when I get to the end of her story and realize it…well, doesn’t have an ending. It’s just dangling. It’s a short story about a girl who discovers some of her friends are werewolves. These were her last few lines:

The figure slowly transformed into a person. Not just any person, but my friend Josephine. I guess I passed out because when I opened my eyes Josephine was staring at me.

“You okay?” she asked.

“Yeah, just don’t kill me, please,” I whispered.

“Don’t worry. We’re not that bad,” she said.

See, it doesn’t end. Now, considering she’d written the entire story by herself and we needed to leave for school in five minutes, I thought a little editorial license on my part was okay. I was just wrapping it up for her, not using any of those vocab words.

“Don’t worry. We’re not that bad,” she said.

“How many….who…what?” I couldn’t get out a coherent question.

“Our whole group, except for you,” Josephine replied.

“Are you going to make me one of you?” The thought horrified me. “Now that I think about it, I like being human. I like it a lot.”

Josephine laughed, same as she always did and at that moment I knew it would all be okay. “No. We like you just the way you are. And I wouldn’t do that to you. Trust me, werewolf girls have a really hard time shaving their legs. All that fur….”

Lyndon rolled his eyes and Josephine and I laughed. I was just one of the group. Or maybe I should say pack.

Girl: (giggling) Mom, my teacher will think I’m weird with that shaving the legs line.

Me: But it’s funny. Didn’t you laugh?

She kept it. Ah…it’s good to be the boss.

Now, I’m going to go boss my own wip….

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 7:11 am

September 13, 2007

Lemme Impress You

I’m often sharing my culinary disasters…but today I’m sharing a culinary treat, one of my favorite comfort foods, Kona Inn Banana Bread. Click on over to the Soapbox Queens and check it out

I can hear it now: “But she’s so talented, so beautiful, so demure, and now a culinary genius.” Yes, life has been kind and generous to me. And I’d like to share the love…

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 1:56 am

September 12, 2007

Polling for a Hero

I’m moving right along in my book where the hero is a spy, but I’m still trying to really fix him in my head physically. (Trust me when I say that you can write nearly the entire book while being in this unsure state, but it’s not recommended.)

Meet Gage Carswell, British agent (and keep in mind I’m still in draft stage):

He’d established himself as a master of seduction early on when he joined The Firm a decade ago, straight out of university. He’d realized he’d rather seduce than coerce, earning himself the code name Eros. He didn’t really have much of a stomach for torture. Although he did whatever the job required, he’d much rather ply her with an instrument of pleasure than pain.

So, today, dear reader, you get to cast a vote for Gage Carswell. I’m polling for my hero.

Christian Bale

or

Jon Hamm

I know which way I’m leaning…but I thought I’d ask. And no, don’t talk to me about Sean Connery or Pierce Brosnan or my personal fave spy, Daniel Craig, cause they are hot guys but they bring too much baggage with them — I can’t mold them into the hero I want.

So, so, whaddaya think? Talk to me.

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 5:26 am

September 11, 2007

Fall

Fall is here. Is it the shortening days or the cooler mornings that tell me this? Well, that is a hint, but the big clue is that everyone in my house is sick. Girl has a terrible sinus infection and despite the antibiotics is feeling lousy, lousy, lousy so she’s staying home in bed today. The DH isn’t staying home but he is similarly symptomatic. Got to love when those fall allergies kick in. Thank God, I’m healthy as a horse. Somebodies got to take care of them….

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 6:11 am

September 10, 2007

December Blaze

I’ve got a special treat for you today…new cover. Smokin’ hot new cover.:thankyou: It’s posted over at the Soapbox Queens. Click here. Now. Honest, you DO NOT WANT TO MISS THIS!

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 1:06 am

September 7, 2007

Bourne, Bourne, and more Bourne

In my current book, the hero is a spy. Sorry, but those guys are irresistable to me — even though falling in love with them often proves to be very unhealthy…well, deadly to be exact. In the name of research and inspiration, I’ve immersed myself in the Bourne movies. Monday was The Bourne Identity, Tuesday The Bourne Supremacy, and Wednesday night the entire family schlepped it to the theater for The Bourne Ultimatum. I :love2: those movies. Ah, the sacrifices a writer makes in the name of research.:devil:

Well, we can all relax because I write romance and my heroine isn’t going to die just because she goofs up and falls in love with Spy Man.

Hey, over at Soapbox Queens it’s Free Book Friday! Drop over and give a mememe shout out and you might win a free book.

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 5:37 am

September 5, 2007

Ring Tone Says it All

The DH finally ordered personalized ring tones on his phone. When I call him now…AC DC’s Highway to Hell plays.:fryingpan: Wait until he gets home! I’ll make him think Highway to Hell…wait, he already does think that….:happy2::happy2::happy2:

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 10:56 pm

Tale from the Trenches

Driving home from school yesterday:

Me: So, this heroine I’m writing now…her name is Holly.

Girl: Yeah. That’s a nice name.

Me: Uh-huh. Her mother wanted to name her children after seasonal things when they were born and she was born in December around Christmas. She says she thinks she’s lucky her mother didn’t name her Hohoho.

Girl squeals and laughs: Mom! She sounds like you! That’s something you’d say.

Me: Well, I am writing this book.:thankyou: So, you wanna know her brother’s name?

Girl: Sure. Go ahead.

Me: Buck — cause he was born on the opening day of deer season.

Girl: That’s so…random. Where do you come up with this stuff? How do you come up with this stuff?

Me: I dunno. It just pops into my head.

Girl: (shaking her head) And the amazing part is you get paid to do it.

:mrgreen: Well, there is that.

(Pssst. Hey, have you heard? It’s a switcheroo. The amazing Julie Leto is Queen for a Day over at Soapbox Queens and our own Rhonda Nelson is ablog over at the Plotmonkeys. Check’em out!)

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 6:50 am

September 4, 2007

NFH

I am pissed. The Neighbors from Hell struck this weekend. Come on over to the Soapbox Queens to catch the rest of the story.:doh:

Filed under: Uncategorized — Jennifer @ 4:16 am
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